Hello! Really loved the vibes to this... So much that I wanted to share it with my friends! But the spanish version is quite, stiff?
I don't know how you translated it, but there are a lot of sentences that are hard to read or totally lose significance,,, which is a big deal considering that it's a text horror game.
I'm not sure how Twine works when it comes to translations and idiom choices, but if you are up to it, I'm more than willing to help properly translate it! (I'm actually begging, please, I really want to share it with my friends, it's so spooky, and I feel empty since I have no one that speaks english to share it with...) Feel free to ignore though!